Sunday, January 4, 2015

Surreal love



This post has been published by me as a part of the Blog-a-Ton 50; the fiftieth edition of the online marathon of Bloggers; where we decide and we write. In association with ​Soulmates: Love without ownership by Vinit K Bansal. To be part of the next edition, visit and start following Blog-a-Ton.


"With her starved legs wide open she lay on the bed with her dress gathered at her waist. She was squeezing as he sniffed her hungry labia and licked it caressingly. Her legs widened and her pelvic swayed in a rhythm. He had tasted and tickled her clit and stroked the vulva till she moaned and was out of breath. She clenched her fists and felt the contractions between her legs, when she closed her legs on his face. She was satisfied. 
She got up to soothe him and petted him till he wagged his tail. She fondled his balls and stroked him till there was a knot and he was hard like a rock. He was ecstatic with the rhythmic hand job. He stood still and panted heavily. He calmed himself down, after he had cleaned himself looking at her happy face."

It all came to her as a flashback one night when she was crying to herself lying next to her husband. Kaina had consciously forgotten about it as if it were a dream, because the fact was she was now married. She never had to explain Rocky, what she needed. They knew how the other felt within by a mere look in each other's eyes. But this relationship was a secret. Probably because it would not be understood by anyone except the two of them. Actually it was not acceptable by the society she lived in. Although she could but she never let Rocky become a part of her present even though he lived with her and her husband to make sure she gives 100 percent to her marriage.

That night when Kaina tried explaining her husband how badly she needed him to make love, she felt as if she was begging and justifying her physical needs. Thereafter she thought to herself, Some people become a part of our souls, they don't ask you questions. You don't tell them a thing. Yet they know what is missing, what you need, what has happened, what will satisfy you, what will make you happy. As she pondered sitting alone in her room the next morning, Rocky came to her waging his tail and he rubbed his head against her arm. She felt no resistance, as her legs unfurled to his warm tongue yet again as he understood what she needed. She realised who was her real soul mate.


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49 comments:

  1. I didn't understand. Was she thinking about a past sexual relationship? What did you mean by 'this relationship was a secret?

    Cheers
    CRD

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    1. Sorry if my story got you confused. Yes, she was thinking about her past relationship. It was a secret because it was not acceptable.

      Thanks for your honest feedback.

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    2. Dammit! I understood the plot only after reading the follow-up comments. My apologies. The first para was super-erotic. And what a twist. Really bold and shocking.

      Your post is like the GG Allin of blog posts.Superb!

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    3. It happens with the best of us. Your comment helped me look of areas I could have written properly. Glad if you liked it.

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  2. Why did she have to leave what was described as a relationship understood only by Rocky and her?

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    1. Because it was unacceptable.

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    2. Excuse my naivete... I'm sorry I rushed myself through your story... The unnatural (unacceptable) beauty of what you have said here is the saddened truth of unwilling marriages and what unfulfilled carnal pleasures can drive us to...

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    3. Thank you so much for revisiting, I agree with you. The loneliness beneath and the carnal pleasures are really hard to handle when you are in a relationship yet alone at the surface.

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  3. This is lovely. Fact that they were dogs came at the end...very creative! All d best for Blog-a-ton 50! :)

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    1. Sorry to disappoint you but Rocky is a dog and Kaina is a girl/woman.

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  4. Woahh !! U need some guts to pen down such stuff !! Very nice work :) soulmates can be anyone !!

    All d best for BAT :)

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    1. I have attempted an erotic story for the first time. I'm really nervous. If you liked it, thanks.

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  5. Words aren't a necessity, The souls that understand each other, true meaning of soul mates jotted here. Wonderfully woven right from the start.

    However, what got in the way, for me, was Rocky staying in the house to ensure that she gave her 100% to the marriage yet he returns to her to fulfill her needs. A soulmate would ensure she finds a way out in her present and let her forget it for real. Wouldn't he? A bit contradictory.

    You've jotted a beautiful meaning of soulmate here. Brilliant! :)
    Best Wishes!

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    1. You have overwhelmed me with your take.. Well the idea I tried to portray was, despite voicing out her needs she didn't get what kaina desired. On the contrary Rocky though living with her never came to her mind until that helpless moment.. When her carnal desires were mounting up.. Rocky was there to satiate her. Had he became a hindrance or Kaina's preference she wouldn't have expected her husband to make love.

      I take your feedback as a gift! :)

      P.s. Felt like sharing.. that's why left a reply. :)

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    2. I missed that, I guess. Glad to read the reply! (I was wondering about the reply and had to search for the blog :D ) *makes a mental note to remember the URL :D* Looking forward to read lots from the candid girl :)

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  6. Umm. I don't know what to say, honestly. It didn't confuse me, it was strange. I mean no disrespect to your writing of course; the first paragraph definitely was erotic, so that worked. But yeah, different take. Sad too. All the best for BAT.

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    1. I can understand. I'm prepared for comments like... Some one ttelling me- I'm sick or the story is gross!
      thanks for sparing some time. :)

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  7. Different and very interesting. All the best for BAT! :)

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  8. Confused for first time, but after reading second time I was surprised and amazed. Really you should have such guts to shoot the bullets(words) in erotica style. But true that the world is too busy and people are forgetting their loved ones! Sometimes strange things happen in strange ways... ATB for BAT 50...

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  9. That was bold enough...
    Nice one...

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  10. Megha,

    It took me sometime to understand that it was a dog. Nonetheless, I must say one needs courage to pen down these things. I am certain not many of us can do that.

    It is interesting that your blog says, "Candid girl". :)

    I would certainly appreciate the narration and how the story was seamless.

    All the best for BAT!

    Regards,
    Khushboo

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    1. Thanks Khushboo. Yes I'm a candid girl. :-)
      Glad you liked the narration.

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  11. Very different and took me by surprise. It will be interesting to see how you came up with such an idea.
    It was at a very weirdly psychic level, not to say that I did not like it though.

    All the very best.

    Regards
    Animesh

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    1. Animesh, our experiences through our near ones give us enough insight to the under lying realities of life. That sometime reflects in our writing.
      Sorry, if you did not like it. I appreciate your honesty.

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  12. This story is on very different lines... and lives to its title .. :)
    all the best.

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    1. Thank you so much Aishwarya, for relating the story with the title. It is a story of surreal love shared between two people.
      You are the only one who pointed it out!

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  13. First of all kudos for the bold post...you wrote the emotions and relation very well without making it offensive...and how very erotic..

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    1. Thank you so much for your encouraging words.

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  14. It is a strange story, maybe bold! I feel bad for all the three lives involved in the story!

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  15. Aativas, you are absolutely right..the absurdity of the situation is that kaina found her soul mate in Rocky...in unhappiness.

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    1. Thank you, all the best to you as well!

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  17. bold take, it's weird to think this kind of relationship but weird might happens when we struck in weird relationship, this story also affirmed that dog is friend in many other ways we can think.

    My Blogaton#50 post Soulmates

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    1. :-)
      Cifar I read your blog post long ago. Really liked it.

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  18. you never know where one can find true love....though it did 'yike' me out on first read...but the essence u brought to the theme is amazing...and justified too...

    i had once written about a man finding love with a mannequin because no one wanted him in the real world, so thumbs up for using shock value to the prompt!

    my entry is here- http://titli15081977.blogspot.in/2015/01/together-forever_4.html

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    1. Thank you so much for being honest! I know a lot of my closed ones who managed to comprehend the story felt that ways. Unfortunately, call it is my imagination or exposure to some reality lying underneath I was able to conceive a story about an absurd relationship of soul mates.
      I am overwhelmed to read you liked my contrast to the theme of Blog-a-ton 50.
      I really liked your Greek Story! :) It was special..!

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  19. Finally i see someone actually putting up soulmate word attached to not only a guy and a girl. That was a very bold stuff i read. I am amazed and loved what i read. :)
    All the best.

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    1. Alcina, thank you so much for such an encouraging comment. I tried something unconventional and I am really motivated to write more. :-)

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  20. Woah! Shocker! But my mind is going to carry it for a long time to come. U wrote just enough for imagination to go wild.

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    1. Shri,

      Thank yo so much, m glad it had that kind of impact! I was kind of waiting to hear from you..I liked your story as well. It was unique in many ways!

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  21. Ahan that's was intense and bold. A different take. I like it :)

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  22. Congratulations on the win! Keep participating in Blog-a-Ton!

    Someone is Special

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    1. Sarav Thank you so much! You guys together make a great team! I will participate often I promise! :)

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    2. Without your help, JB would have missed her SILVER BATOM. All thanks to you. Keep supporting and good luck for the next! Please drop an email with your name, address and other details specified in the post.

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    3. Without your help, JB would have missed her SILVER BATOM. All thanks to you. Keep supporting and good luck for the next! Please drop an email with your name, address and other details specified in the post.

      Thank you,
      Sarav

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